A Problem of Ghosts or a Ghost’s Problem

October 27, 2015


​​ElsBeth and the Call of the Castle Ghosties,

her third adventure, begins with the ghosts.


Present Time, Scottish Highlands, the Castle


     Durst was not upset about being dead.

     But he was upset, mightily so.

     His homeland was threatened.

     Not for the first time over the ages. But while past threats had come from fierce soldiers he had fought with fiery passion and honor, this danger came in the smooth words and slippery smile from the one known as “Gorgeous.” And though Durst was now a cold ghost, it chilled him.

     From a rough-hewn cavern beneath the dungeon, Durst’s vaporous form rose up and up, until he was high above the tower walls. Below him the castle’s grey stones gleamed softly in the weak moonlight.

     A fog lifted slowly from the rocky cliff that bordered his land and overlooked a restless inland sea.

     An owl swooped past in search of prey. A lone wolf howled. Other creatures of the night went about their quiet business.

     This land must not be destroyed!


     Durst returned to his solitary chamber deep underground.

     He rubbed the flat edge of his stone knife back and forth, back and forth, against his pale blue cheek.

     Done then with thinking, he stabbed the blade overhead, and a single crash of thunder quaked the Highland dark, summoning two other unearthly guardians of the castle.

     In their own times and in their own ways each of them had devoted their living days to these lands — the proud mountains and their valleys of sweet heather, on which even a god could lie and rest his head and drink from bottomless, clear lakes.

     The ghosts shifted in the small space, uncomfortable together. They were not friends. But they were bound by a love of their homeland that could not be bounded by a short earthly life.

     Now they needed one from the living world. One with the purpose ... and the magic ... to protect this sacred place.

     Durst took up the length of sapwood from the sacred alder tree on which he had carved the old symbols, and with the stone knife cut the final notch of a simple flute.

     The three touched, a spark flew, and it grew until their shimmering forms blazed in a cold, white-gold fire.

     Durst’s ancient ghostly lips met the living wood.

     He breathed in all their hopes and fears, and sent forth to the Four Winds a sweet, sharp song. His command was clear: “Carry here the youngest of the clan, the youngest Thistle.”

     A future was cast. 



Please reload

Featured Posts

ElsBeth's First Book Trailer - We'd love your comments! Fun? Exciting? What do you think?

January 19, 2016

Please reload

Recent Posts

December 15, 2015

Please reload

Please reload

Search By Tags
Please reload

Follow Us
  • Facebook Basic Square
  • Twitter Basic Square
  • Google+ Basic Square

Download FREE SAMPLE of "ElsBeth and the Pirate's Treasure"

Follow ElsBeth on

  • Facebook Social Icon